It's sad that I have to say this is great (how can war crimes be great?) work but it is needed work!

There are some minor and not so minor details that could be worked in order to maximize the effect of this presentation (and other works for that matter).

One thing is the "they" and "we" sentences that pop in the beginning... you should avoid the us VS them type of statement because this may make some people who were susceptible to be "touched" with the argument be less prone to give the issue less "heart". To avoid wars we have to avoid the whole concept of being against someone... it is better to make people agree with you without having to take sides.

By changing "them" for Israel and avoiding refering "us" you may convince people who are on the "other side", you may "them" join the "us" altogether.

Then we have the "Please...No More Ignorance" sentence, even though this is not an incorrect way to write english it gives out a feeling of "foreign accent" that may get on some more prejudiced watchers nerve. A more grammatical correct sentence would be: "No More ignorance... please!"

Even though these may seem as minor details they may make the difference from agreeing but not caring and giving the subject extra-tought and extra attention.

On the other side you can send me the word file and I'll translate it into Portuguese

Dunno if I can do it extra-fast but I'll do it on the possible speed...

muadib@portugalmail.com

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design makes me horny

when you live in Palestine you will know that all the numbers are true

but no matter what they do, they will never erase the smile from our children faces

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_{Alice came to a fork in the road...
"Which road do I take?"she asked.
"Where do you want to go?"responded the Cheshire cat.
"I don't know,"Alice answered.
Then said the cat,"it doesn't matter"}

Alright I'll spread this through my page!

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Candle for every child, died in all kinds of abuse. [link]

~Stop-The-Violence - please also check Amnesty.org.

okay done, this article is on my journal now!

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Candle for every child, died in all kinds of abuse. [link]

~Stop-The-Violence - please also check Amnesty.org.

Amazing video.
i couldnt stop crying

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why be ordinary when you can be extraordinary???

<sup>I saw this!
Really heart broken scenes!
I can't do much just pray for the innocents!
I'll definitely spread it to my friends
Thanks a lot for your efforts & concern !

May Allah bless you & the team members!</sup>

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ѕσмєdαу ι’ℓℓ вє ℓσѕт αиd fσяgσттєи…

this is the truth..sad...
a link is on my journal now!
god bless ya chabab

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لا إله إلا الله محمد رسول الله
ArchnophobiA Gallery

There is no peace effort here. It's obvious that you efforts are backed by a hatred for Israel. You're numbers and rhetoric are skewed towards your bias. I cannot support this. I have compassion for all innocent life, men, women, children, and the unborn alike. Throw in some statistics about the number of innocent lives lost from suicide bombing attacks in Israel. I'm all for peace. You have an agenda and hatred that only promotes more violence and the cycle continues.Take out the rhetoric and keep it about the innocent and you'll be doing everyone a justice.

will spread the word

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look, stare and just walk away